BOOK 11 • AGES 3–6 • COMPLETE MANUSCRIPT PREVIEW
EMOJI CARNIVAL

TEAMWORK & FRUSTRATION
AND THE CROOKED CARNIVAL TENT

A lively story about stopping before pushing harder, breaking a big problem into jobs, and letting each helper do the part they can do safely.

TEAMWORK • BUS ONEFRUSTRATION • BUS TWO
FINAL STORY TEXT • PAGE-BY-PAGE VISUAL DIRECTION

Written specifically for ages 3–6: simple cooperative language, strong visual sequencing, repeated job labels, safety-conscious problem solving, and approximately 15–50 words per story page.

PAGE 01

The crooked tent

The twin buses arrived beside the storytelling tent. One corner drooped. One rope sagged. The sign leaned sideways. Frustration stared at it. “It looked straight yesterday!”

ART: Clear visual problem: tilted sign, slack rope, drooped corner. No collapsed structure.
PAGE 02

Push harder?

Frustration grabbed the signpost and pushed. It leaned the other way. “UGH!” They pushed harder. The post wobbled. Teamwork called, “Stop! More force is not always more help.”

ART: Wobble lines; Teamwork makes clear stop gesture at safe distance.
PAGE 03

Name the problem

Teamwork walked around the tent without touching it. “What is wrong?” Frustration pointed. “Everything!” Teamwork smiled. “Let us make ‘everything’ smaller.” They counted: sign, rope, corner.

ART: Three labelled visual circles: SIGN • ROPE • CORNER.
PAGE 04

Ask the tent keeper

The tent keeper came over with a tool bag. “Please do not tighten ropes yourselves,” she said. “Some parts need an adult.” Frustration sighed. Teamwork asked, “What jobs can we do safely?”

ART: Adult keeper clearly responsible for structural hardware.
PAGE 05

Three safe jobs

The keeper gave them three jobs: collect fallen pegs, carry light signs, and keep the walkway clear. “I can do all three!” Frustration said. Teamwork shook their head. “Or we can split them.”

ART: Three job icons; pegs are loose on ground, not hammered by children.
PAGE 06

Pick a job

Frustration chose fallen pegs. Teamwork moved light signs. Kindness offered to clear the walkway. “Now three jobs happen at once,” Teamwork said. Frustration blinked. “That is faster than me doing everything.”

ART: Three parallel action lanes; Kindness cameo is secondary.
PAGE 07

A missing peg

Frustration found seven pegs. The keeper needed eight. “Of course one is missing!” Frustration groaned. Teamwork asked, “Where have we looked? Where have we not looked?”

ART: Simple checked/unchecked map of nearby area.
PAGE 08

Search by sections

They divided the grass into three sections. Frustration searched by the benches. Teamwork checked beside the bus. Kindness looked near the picnic tables. “Found it!” Kindness called.

ART: Overhead scene divided into three coloured search zones.
PAGE 09

Not finished yet

The keeper secured the corner, but the sign still leaned. Frustration groaned again. “We worked and it is still crooked!” Teamwork said, “One finished job does not finish every job.”

ART: Corner now straight, sign still tilted; progress is visible.
PAGE 10

Check progress

They looked again. Rope: fixed. Corner: fixed. Sign: not fixed. Frustration counted on their fingers. “Two done. One left.” Their shoulders dropped a little. “That sounds better than everything is broken.”

ART: Three-item checklist with two gold ticks and one open circle.
PAGE 11

The sign problem

The sign’s light wooden base had slipped into a muddy patch. The keeper said, “You may carry the sign while I place a flat board underneath.” Frustration and Teamwork each held one side.

ART: Adult positions board; two characters lift only lightweight sign together.
PAGE 12

One, two, lift

“Ready?” Teamwork asked. “Ready,” said Frustration. “One, two, lift.” They raised together. The keeper slid the board under. “One, two, down.” The sign stood straight.

ART: Four-panel coordinated lift with clear counting rhythm.
PAGE 13

The tent opens

The storytelling tent opened on time. Families walked safely along the clear path. Frustration looked at the straight sign. “I wanted to fix it by pushing harder.” Teamwork laughed. “The sign had other ideas.”

ART: Safe open tent; families entering, path uncluttered.
PAGE 14

What frustration noticed

“Frustration told me something was not working,” Frustration said. Teamwork nodded. “Yes. Then we changed how we worked.” “So frustration can be useful?” “Very—if we listen before we shove the sign over.”

ART: Comic callback to tilted sign, now steady.
PAGE 15

The team check

Before leaving, Teamwork drew three boxes on a card: NAME IT. SPLIT IT. CHECK IT. Frustration added a fourth: ASK FOR HELP. “That one mattered,” they said.

ART: Four-box checklist becomes recurring visual tool.
PAGE 16

Straight ahead

At sunset, the twin buses rolled past the now-straight tent. Frustration held up the checklist. “Next time everything is broken—” Teamwork interrupted, smiling. “We make everything smaller.”

ART: Closing panorama with straight tent and checklist in foreground.
EMOTIONAL-LEARNING LAYER

Frustration can signal that the current approach is not working.

Adult/educator note: The story models stopping before escalating effort, naming a problem specifically, splitting work into safe roles, asking an adult for structural tasks, checking progress, and using teamwork to reduce overload.

  1. Why did pushing harder not help?
  2. How did Teamwork make “everything” smaller?
  3. Which jobs were safe for the characters?
  4. Why did they search in sections?
  5. What are the four team-check steps?

Front-cover treatment

Teamwork and Frustration stand in front of a delightfully crooked striped tent, each holding one side of a lightweight sign while the adult tent keeper points to a four-box checklist.

Series lockup: EMOJI CARNIVAL — BOOK 11

Authors: E. H. Ackerman & J. D. Ackerman

Back-cover treatment

The tent straightens across the back panel beside four oversized boxes: NAME IT • SPLIT IT • CHECK IT • ASK FOR HELP.

Copy: Frustration wants to fix the crooked carnival tent by pushing harder. Teamwork has another plan: make the big problem smaller, share the safe jobs, and ask for the help that only someone else can give.

Release status: COMPLETE MANUSCRIPT PREVIEW — NOT PRINT-READY. Final character sheets, cover/interior artwork, layout, trim/bleed, laid-out proof, metadata verification, rights and final release QA remain required.